She didn't know this but another pirate captain by the name of Purple Kelp was following her every movement. Cannibal knew that Purple Kelp wanted revenge on her because Cannibal had eaten half of her crew but Cannibal didn't know that Purple Kelp was here right now. Captain Purple Kelp knew the way to the Rainbow Jewels so she decided to plan a surprise for Cannibal. She stole the jewels and hid them away in her ship. Purple Kelp shouted at her crew:
"Ahoy, m'hearties! It's time to get our revenge on Cannibal. Keep thy treasure safe. Stay at the ship. If I don't come back, hoist the anchor and sail off to safety with the treasure."
When Cannibal arrived, she was tackled by a pirate but she just bit the pirate and he jumped off, screaming. Purple Kelp landed on her head and started attacking her. Cannibal was furious. She tried to bite, kick or scratch Purple Kelp but her attempts were futile.
Purple Kelp attacked Cannibal until she fell senseless. Purple Kelp threw Cannibal into the flames since she was such a nuisance. Cannibal was never heard of again. Purple Kelp ad her crew were now very rich. They never needed to go looking for gold ever again, but of course they did continue to look for gold.
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ReplyDeletethat was a really cool past tense story thingy so who wrote it? anybody know? please please please please please please tell me
ReplyDeleteBLUE HOUSE IS THE BEST!!!!!!!!
Purple Kelp was obviously a very strong woman- I am glad she came out on top. I enjoyed reading your story.
ReplyDeleteThis was a really good piece of writing someday you may become an author (if you want to)
ReplyDeleteThis was a really cool story - but who wrote it? I think it was good that the pirates were female because everyone immediately thinks of male pirates.
ReplyDelete- Jenny
That was really exciting and detailed.Who wrote it?
ReplyDeleteHila
Nice story, I know who wrote it. Captain Kelp is well and alive in our classroom.
ReplyDeleteby Laurence
I enjoyed that story too!
ReplyDeleteIt has good describing words.
Who wrote it?
That was a really good story with heaps of description Miss Helen Purple Kelp. I really liked it and it was very good, but I wonder two things. First: do you know why the captain and the crew kept on looking for gold?
ReplyDeleteSecond: why did you deprive us of the knowledge of who wrote (I know now because I was told)
Hi, I think that's a really good story, I'm wondering, though, what Captain Cannibal's real name was, if Cannibal wasn't his given name. Also, how did Purple Kelp get her name? I'm fairly certain that Purple Kelp wasn't her given name
ReplyDeleteFrom Rose (Chloe's sister)
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ReplyDeleteI like your story It had some awesome discribing words!
Who wrote this?